Thursday, March 26, 2015

Revised Narrative Poem

Extracurriculars

In the middle of the room we sat on dented
Suitcases, under the light of a single swinging bulb,
Hanging from the smoke-stained ceiling.

A glinting gun, with a trigger never
Before squeezed, was placed on a torn
Card table, stolen from the local bar.

It was his game, so he grabbed
The cold metal first.  He handled it between his
Sweaty hands as if it was a familiar tool.

We looked on in a haze that matched the heat of
The afternoon as our senior spun the metal cylinder until
It settled on a single chamber with a final click.

Maybe we pleaded as the barrel pressed itself
Into his pale temple, but the unexpected look in his bloodshot
Eyes held us at a distance with their sudden brightness.

Pieces of him were scattered on his oily, dark leather jacket,
And he dropped to the floor at our feet in muffled silence
Amidst the thunderclap and ringing in our ears.

A scene which the newspaper declared “he lost.”

No comments:

Post a Comment